You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. In your letter tell him/her of the incorrect information give him/her the correct information explain why they should correct it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you about the incorrect fact present in the

book

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published on the 24th of December. Being a huge fan of yours,I always purchased the

book

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on the published date and read it.

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time ,I found incorrect information about Agra City.In the

book

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,it is written that The Taj Mahal is situated on the bank of Ganga river in Agra city.

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this

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is not true as it was commissioned by the emperor on the Yamuna River bank. Your books are read everywhere in the world as they are always published worldwide . If we don't correct it

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the wrong information will be given to future generations

as well as

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the current generation . I would like to suggest you please correct the statement in the

book

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and re-publish it. Looking forward to hearing from you at your convenience . Yours Sincerely, ABC

pskhandelwal13Sun Feb 02 2025

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Task Achievement

Consider expanding your introduction slightly to provide a clearer context for your letter.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to use consistent spacing and punctuation throughout the letter to enhance readability.

Coherence and Cohesion

Try to separate ideas more distinctly into paragraphs, ensuring each one focuses on a single point.

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The tone of your letter is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for the context.

Positive Highlight

You have clearly identified the incorrect information and provided the correct details, demonstrating good task achievement.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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