You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. In your letter tell him/her of the incorrect information give him/her the correct information explain why they should correct it.

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Dear Sir, Hope
this
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letter finds you well.I am writing
this
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letter to inform you about the incorrect fact present in the
book
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published on
14th
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of Dec 2024. Being a huge fan of yours,I always purchase the
book
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on the published date and read it.Your books always have true facts but the latest
book
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has
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incorrect information about the city
Agra
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of Agra
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which I would like to highlight.In the
book
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,it is stated that the Taj Mahal is situated on the bank of
river
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the river
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Ganga .
However
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,the true fact is ,
it
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that it
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is located on the bank of
Yamuna
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the Yamuna
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river
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and
commissioned
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in the past by the emperor Shah Jahan for his beloved wife. I would suggest you to please correct the mistake and re-publish the
book
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again because your books are published worldwide and if we don't correct the fact
then
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wrong information will be passed to
furture
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future
generations
as well as
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the
currect
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current
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generation. Looking forward to
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at your convenience . Yours Sincerely, Payal

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coherence and cohesion
Consider separating your points into distinct paragraphs for better clarity and flow. For instance, you could dedicate one paragraph to the incorrect information and another to the reasons it should be corrected.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to include a space after punctuation marks such as periods and commas for a cleaner presentation. For example, 'well.I am' should be 'well. I am'.
task achievement
You could strengthen your conclusion by reiterating your admiration for the author's work and expressing hope for the next edition of the book.
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The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for addressing an author.
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The specific example of incorrect information regarding the Taj Mahal demonstrates your knowledge and engagement with the subject matter.
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