The maps below describe an area before and after the construction of a hydroelectric power plant. Assel.

The picture demonstrates an

area

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previously and

afterward

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the building of a hydroelectric

power

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plant

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Overall

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, it is readily apparent that

the an

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area

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added

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instead

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of a park

power

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plant

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. There was

also

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significant relocation in terms of

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the river

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river

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rivers

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, and

only

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areas that remained

the

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apply

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some

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were

forest

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forests

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, mountains and

village

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villages

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. The dam itself and the hydroelectric

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plant

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have been constructed, becoming central features in the

area

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. Transmission towers have been added to transfer electricity from the

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plant

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to other areas. A hotel has been built near the lake, likely catering to tourists and visitors. The forest and mountains remain largely unaffected by the construction. The historic castle and village

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remain, though they are now located near the newly created lake.

Overall

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, the development of the hydroelectric

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plant

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has significantly altered the

area

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by introducing a lake, dam, and supporting infrastructure.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, overall".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, power, plant with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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146 words

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

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