The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Assel.

The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Assel.
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The map describes the alterations of an area called Denham from 1986 to
present
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the present
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.
Overall
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, the city
perfectly
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was perfectly
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developed and
it is clear that
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significant changes were made
new
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buildings. The
town
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was reformed thoroughly, seeing necessary changes for the people of
this
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town
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. In 1986, there were only
few
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a few
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houses scattered across the
town
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. In the present day, the number of houses has increased dramatically, with new residential areas constructed around the primary school and along the main road. In 1986, large areas of farmland surrounded the
town
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, especially the north and south. In current times, much of the farmland has been replaced by housing developments. Only a small portion of farmland remains. A retirement home has been built near the primary school, adding to the
town
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’s amenities. The post office, primary school, and gardens remain intact, but the shops have been removed. Over time, Denham has transitioned from a rural village into a more residential and urbanized
town
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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