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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram displays a plan of a floor of a public library in the past 20 years and how it looks in the present time.
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, most of the library floor is changed in the present. The main noticeable change is the removal of tables and chairs that are located in the middle of the library and the addition of self-service machines. The enquiry
desk
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 is replaced with a
cafe
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. The CDs, video and
computer
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 games
room
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 is redeveloped to be bigger to involve two sofas, storytelling events and
children
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's fiction
books
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. The
children
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's book
room
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 is replaced with the lecture
room
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. The enquiry
desk
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room
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 which is on the right of the entrance is replaced with a
cafe
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 and the reading
room
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 in the left corner of the entrance is rebuilt to become a
computer
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room
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 with the change of its entrance to be opposite the
cafe
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. The adult non-fiction
books
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 that are located between the
children
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's
books
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room
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 and the enquiry
desk
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 remained the same with the addition of an information
desk
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 and self-service machines to be located between the lecture and the
cafe
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. Adult fiction
books
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 which are between the
computer
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 games and the reading
room
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 changed to all reference
books
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 to be located between
children
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's fiction
books
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 and the
computer
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room
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. The table and chairs in the middle are removed.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words desk, cafe, computer, room, children, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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