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The pie chart shows how people use four modes of transport in the city of Edmonton,as well as how the table shows data from five different driving reasons.

The pie chart shows how people use four modes of transport in the city of Edmonton,as well as how the table shows data from five different driving reasons.
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The pie chart and table illustrate the proportion of the
transportation
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 modes that are used in the city of Edmonds, and the five different reasons for driving
the
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car
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.
Overall
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, it is evident from the first figure that, the most used
transportation
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 mode is the
car
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, and the
last
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 ones are the buses and taxis.
Similarly
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,from the second figure, the most common reason for using vehicles is for work, and the lowest uses are for shopping and leisure activities.
According to
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 the pie chart, the most popular vehicle is the
car
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, with nearly half of the total.
Whereas
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, the least popular are buses and taxis, with 10% for each.
Moreover
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, light rail transit is the second most used way of
transportation
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, with over one-third. As seen in the table, the most common reason for using the
car
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 for
transportation
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 is for commuting to work, with 55%.
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, for shopping and leisure activities, people use the
car
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 the least than others, with just 15% for each.
In addition
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, for taking children to school and for business, a
car
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 is used in a similar range, 40% and 45%, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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