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The charts below show the percentafe spent on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentafe spent on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart presents information on how much was spent on transport infrastructure in
four
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 countries in the
four
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years
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 (1990, 1995, 2000, 2005).
Overall
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, Portugal and Italy had the highest spending proportions in the
four
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years
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,
while
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, the USA and the UK had the least amount of spending. Portugal had the highest spending
percentage
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 in the
four
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 countries,
whereas
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 the UK had the lowest
percentage
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. Portugal spent the most amount of money in the
four
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years
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 starting with the highest amount
in
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of
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 the
four
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 countries in 1990 with more than 25%.
Then
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 its
expendture
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expenditure
expenditures
 had a downward trend until 20% over the time period.
Italy
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Italy's
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 spending
percentage
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 fluctuated over the
years
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 with more than 20% in 1990 and 2000, and less than 20% in 1995 and 2005.
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, The USA spent
aproximately
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approximately
 10%
1990
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in 1990
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 and 1995 before the
expendature
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expenditure
percentage
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 had a
siginficant
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significant
 increase to around 15% in the
last
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 two
years
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. The UK spending rate was no more than 10 % in 1990, 1995 and 2005 but there was a
raise
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rise
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 to about 13% in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words four, years, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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