The charts below show the percentage of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts

illustrates

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illustrate

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the number of people using

own

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their own

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cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010.

Overall

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, it can

see

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be seen

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from the charts

the

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that

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Adelaide had the highest

owner

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number of owners

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of private cars.

In contrast

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, Sydney and Melbourne had the lowest in

pravate

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private

cars. it is noticeable that more

flunctuations

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fluctuations

fluctuation

occurred in Brisbane and

perth

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Perth

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Furthermore

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, Adelaide rose with 70% in 2000

then

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gradual growth

were

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was

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by 80% in 2009 which went up to 90% in 2010. The next highest city was Perth started by 50% in 2000, it rose by 60%

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from

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2005 to 2008 . it was badly reduced by 50% in 2010.

while

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apply

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Brisbane

strated

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started

by 40% in 2000 it went up

gradual

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by 50% in 2010.

Moreover

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, Melbourne had started by 30%. it reduced by 20% in 2003

then

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aaproximately

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approximately

increased by 30% in 2007. it badly reduced by 20% in 2010. Sydney

had

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apply

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rose

with

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20% in 2000, it

was

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apply

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went up

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by 40

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% in 2006

then

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next year it

had

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apply

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reduced by 30% in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

171 words

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The charts below show the percentage of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

A number of People are moving from rural areas to cities. Is it a positive or a negative development?

some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons. what is your opinion about that?

Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space. Others argue they should spend the money for poor people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.