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The graph below give information on the number of participant for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2020 to 2020. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below give information on the number of participant for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2020 to 2020. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart compares the
number
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 of
members
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 in five
activities
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 at one social
center
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centre
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 in Melbourne, Australia from 2000 to 2020.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the
number
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 of
participants
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 in
activities
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 varied as the years passed , except in musical performances.
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, those who joined the film
club
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 remained the highest throughout the timeframe. Starting with the
number
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 of individuals who joined the film
club
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 and martial
club
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, in 2000,
members
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 of the film
club
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 were the largest of the five
activities
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 at around 65
participants
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.
This
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 is followed by those in martial
art
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arts
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 who were around 35 people. Despite the slight variations that
occured
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occurred
occur
 as the years passed, by 2020, the
number
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 of
participants
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 in these
activities
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 changed only slightly. Regarding
members
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 of the table
tenis
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tennis
 and
amateur dramatics
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Amateur Dramatics Club
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club
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, in 2010, both had the same
number
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 of individuals
of
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20.
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, after that year, they showed different growth patterns. Table
tenis
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tennis
participants
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 significantly grew to the second most populated activity at well over 50
members
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 in 2020,
while
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members
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 of
amature
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amateur
dramatics experienced a rapid decline to around 6 in the same year. Turning to the musical performance
club
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,
although
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 people only started to join
this
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 activity in 2005, it had a growing pattern,
such
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 that by 2020 it had almost 20
members
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, members, activities, participants, club with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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