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Band 4.5

You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company. In your letter say why you are writing and how you feel explain what happenedDear sirtell them what you would like them to do.

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Dear sir, I am writing
this
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 letter to
complaint
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complain
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to
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you about the problems, I faced during my trip.I am very
disappionted
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disappointed
 with your taxi service and
driver
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.
Last
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sunday
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Sunday
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,I booked a taxi
of
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from
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 your company from
brampton
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Brampton
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 to Blue Mountain Village from 9 am to 11pm. The taxi
driver
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 was late and he did not ask about our destination.My friend was feeling
soffocation
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suffocation
suffocating
 because of the warm
temrature
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temperature
temperatures
 of the car .He stopped a car without our permission and went to the shop to
take
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have
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 a coffee.He did not check
proper
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the proper
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 route and drove
carelessely
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carelessly
.The music was so loud and cheap.I was afraid
due to
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 the behaviour of the
driver
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.The
driver
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 dropped us
on
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at
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wrong
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the wrong
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 destination. when I asked him,he shouted
on
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at
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 me without
ant
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any
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 reason.I am very
dissatishfied
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dissatisfied
 with your
driver
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's behaviour.He should behave in
manner
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a manner
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 with us. I would
reccommend
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recommend
 you
to
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apply
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hire those drivers who
has
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have
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 good experience and communication
skill
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skills
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.I
also
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 want an apology from your
driver
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. Your
sincerly
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sincerely
 Aman

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coherence and cohesion
Try to proofread your letter for spelling and grammatical errors before sending it.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure to provide a clear opening and closing statement to enhance your letter's structure.
task achievement
Use a more formal tone throughout the letter, particularly in your request for action.
task achievement
Your letter addresses the main issues clearly, which helps convey your message.
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You expressed your feelings about the situation, which adds a personal touch to the complaint.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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