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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line chart
present
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presents
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 information about the type of transportation medium
such
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 as Road, Water, Rail and pipeline, used to move products measured in
million
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millions
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tonnes
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of tonnes
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 in the
uk
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UK
 from 1974 to 2002. The most used transport by an ample marger was Road
that
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apply
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started
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starting
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 with
arround
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around
 70 million tonnes it had mostly an increasing trend with only one fall, slightly lower
that
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than
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 70 in 1982 and a plateau at 80 for almost 5
years
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 since 1990. Commodities using aquatic vehicles and those using Railroads overlapped at 40 for what seemed to be the first 5
years
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 after that
while
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 water
rise
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rose
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 slowly for about 3
years
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then
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 kept its
numberts
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numbers
 steady until the
last
Linking Words
 4
years
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 when its trend significantly
growed
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grew
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 reaching 61 million tonnes.
However
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, train transport oscillated between 30 and 40.
by
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By
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 the
last
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 half a decade of the time given it stabilised at 40. the least preferred was
pipeline
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a pipeline
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 that started below 10 in
lest
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less
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 than 10
years
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 it got to 21 where it remained the same until 1990 when it dropped to 20 and stayed there til the end of the period.
Overall
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, it
is explicitly observes
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 that aquatics and Rail
overlaped
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overlapped
 and stayed the same for
th
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the
 first 5
years
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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