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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the methods of dealing with dangerous
waste
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 products in three countries: the Republic of
Korea
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,
Sweden
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, and the United Kingdom.
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, the Republic of
Korea
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 prioritizes recycling as the primary method,
while
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Sweden
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 relies more on incineration. The United Kingdom utilizes more diverse methods, including dumping at sea and chemical treatment,
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 to underground disposal. In the Republic of
Korea
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, 69% of dangerous
waste
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 is recycled, making it the most preferred method.
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 is followed by 22% being buried underground and 9% incinerated. In
Sweden
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, 55% of
waste
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 is disposed of underground,
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 25% is recycled, and 20% is incinerated. The United Kingdom shows a different pattern, where 82% of
waste
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 is buried underground, with the remaining distributed across chemical treatment (8%), dumping at sea (8%), and incineration (2%). Recycling is notably absent as a method in the UK. In summary, each country shows distinct preferences for handling dangerous
waste
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, with
Korea
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 focusing on recycling,
Sweden
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 balancing recycling and incineration, and the UK relying heavily on underground disposal.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, korea, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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