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The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram depicts the
process
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 of recycling
plastic
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bottles
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 into ready-to-wear clothing. In total, there are thirteen stages involved, starting with gathering recycled
plastic
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bottles
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 to producing
well made
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well-made
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 clothing. These
process
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process
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 entailed tons of used
bottles
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 and heavy machinery.
Firstly
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, tons of
bottles
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 were transported to the factories using a few
pick up
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pickup
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 trucks. Upon
its
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their
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 arrival, the
bottles
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 get sorted to make sure
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of its
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its
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their
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 quality. After getting sorted, the materials are headed for the cutting and washing
process
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.
Following
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this
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process
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, the fine
cutted
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cut
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plastic
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are
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is
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 dried underneath a hot
dreanching
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drenching
 sun so that it is dried up nicely. Afterwards,
dried up
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dried-up
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 plastics are up for
boiling
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the boiling
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process
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 and straining
process
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. These
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process
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processes
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 are usually the most interesting
process
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 because
it
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they
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gave
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give
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 you
visualization
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a visualization
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how
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of how
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plastic
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 can turn into yarn.
Next,
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yarn is weaved and rolled to form clothes
such
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 as
:
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apply
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shirt
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a shirt
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, skirt,
pants
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and pants
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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