The diagram represents the cyclic process of life of butterfly, beginning from adult moth that transform into an egg.

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The diagram represents the cyclic process of life of
butterfly
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a butterfly
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, beginning
from
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with
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adult
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an adult
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moth that
transform
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transforms
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into an egg.
Overall
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, it is a procedure alteration of a cyclical and a process of evolution
includes
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that includes
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eight stages.
Initially
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, eggs on milkweed are produced by an
adult
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butterfly and
then
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they
transformed
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are transformed
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into
14 days
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14-day
new hatched
larvae
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,
then
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larvae
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are evolving
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evolve
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into
caterpillar
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caterpillars
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on milkweed.
Secondly
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, change
attachment
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the attachment
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of
larva
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the larva
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. It is
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larvae
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the larvae
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stage. So that,
larvae
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appear on their hatch. Meanwhile,
small
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a small
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ten days chrysalis
grown
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grew
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up her pupa,
then
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appear
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appeared
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on
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apply
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with
head
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a head
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, six legs,
compound
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a compound
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eye, antennae, palps, four wings,
thorax
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a thorax
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,
abdomen
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an abdomen
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,
tails
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and tails
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. As
the
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apply
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evolution continues occurring emergence of
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adult
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adults
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.
Finally
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,
her
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she
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becomes
six
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a
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months
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six-month
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Migration
south
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South
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Mature butterfly.
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starts Mating and egg laying.
Consequently
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, the cyclic growth repeats itself over and over again starting from an
Adult
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and ending with
young
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a young
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moth.
Majority
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The majority
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of insects or creatures develop in
such
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way
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a way
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.

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words adult, larvae with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "represents" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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