The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration shows how black tea
are
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is
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being made and points out the difference between the
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methods that can be used.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there are five stages in black tea making, which start with harvesting and end with frying or drying. Starting with the first
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steps,
first,
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the farmers pick the buds and the first
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leaves of each plant,
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they spread them on a rack and place
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next to a fan.
This
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is the withering phase, and the essence of the fan is to dry out 60% of the water in the leaves. Turning to the next
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stages, the difference between the contemporary method and the conventional one is seen in the third phase. In the conventional way, the leaves are rolled flat and broken
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in the contemporary
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they are cut, torn, and curled. Both means have their merits, the
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traditional
means allow the release of enzymes but, the modern way
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reduces
the time spent and smaller
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granules
are
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obtained
.
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, the outputs of both techniques are spread on a tile or cement for fermentation. Here, the colour of the leaves
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to copper.
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the
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phase, the oxidated leaves are either fried in an oven or dried with hot air dryers to remove 97% of the moisture and increase the flavour and aroma of the tea.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • plucking
  • withering
  • rolling
  • fermentation
  • drying
  • grading
  • packaging
  • oxidation
  • quality
  • efficiency
  • cost-effectiveness
  • scalability
  • aroma
  • flavor profile
  • sequence of steps
  • equipment
  • methodology
  • production rate
  • comparative analysis
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