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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the proportion of
consumer
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 spending in
Ireland
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, Italy,
Spain
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Sweden
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 and Turkey in 2002.
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that food, drinks and tobacco had the highest percentage of
consumer
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 spending in all countries,
while
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leisure
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 and
education
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 had the lowest share of
consumer
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 spending in all countries.
To begin
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 with,
Ireland
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 and Turkey had the largest proportion of
consumer
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 spending with approximately 29% and 32%, respectively.
However
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, Italy ranked first with 9 % in clothing and footwear. Turkey and Italy accounted for 4.35% and 3.20% respectively, in
leisure
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 and
education
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,
whereas
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Ireland
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 had the smallest contribution of
consumer
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 spending with 2.21% in
leisure
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 and
education
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.
Moreover
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, Italy and
Ireland
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 had a similar percentage with approximately 6.5% in clothing and footwear.
On the other hand
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,
Spain
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 had a higher contribution than
Sweden
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, the former standing with just under 19% and the latter ranking with about 16% in food,drinks and tobacco.
Furthermore
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,
Spain
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 stood least with 2% in
leisure
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 and
education
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,
while
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Sweden
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 ranked second with 3.22%.
In contrast
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,
Spain
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 was higher by 1% than
Sweden
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 in clothing and footwear

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumer, ireland, spain, sweden, leisure, education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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