The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map shows three proposed locations for a new supermarket in the city of Ellington.
Overall
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, it is evident that none of the sites would be ideal for all residents of the town.
However
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, for customer Hampford, the out-of-city
location
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A would likely offer more advantages. The first potential
location
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, A, is inside the city itself, situated just off a railway line connecting West to Earth.
This
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site is located in a housing area, which would make it close to a traffic-free zone and a park. It would be easily accessible to shoppers from Hampford who could travel by train. The second
location
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, B, is outside the city and is situated just off a motorway connecting the north to Earth.
This
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site is in the countryside, which would provide ample car parking space and be convenient for shoppers
traveling
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by car.
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, the third suggested
location
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, C, is deep in the countryside, which could benefit consumers
traveling
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by train.
This
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location
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is near industrial areas and the airport.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words location with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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