The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
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The map illustrates two proposed locations for a new
school
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in the
town
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of Canterbury.
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that for customers in
Chartham
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and
Sturry
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, in the centre of the
town
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, S2 would probably offer more advantages.
To begin
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with, the first potential location S1 is outside the
town
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itself and is situated just off the main road to the
town
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of
Sturry
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, lying 5 kilometres to the northeast.
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site is in the countryside and so would be able to accommodate a lot of car parking.
This
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would have access for
school
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children from both
Sturry
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and
Chartham
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who could travel by car, but
school
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students from
Chartham
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travel across the
town
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centre to S1.
In contrast
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, the suggested location, S2, is right in the
town
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centre , which would be good for local residents. Theoretically, the
school
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could have the same
distances
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distance
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from
Chartham
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and
Sturry
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.
However
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, the central area is a no-traffic zone, cars would be unable to park and access would be difficult

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, town, chartham, sturry with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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