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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015
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The bar chart illustrates the annual
fee
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fees
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 of households in the US in three specific
year
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years
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 (2007, 2011, and 2015).
Overall
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, As can be seen in the graph the number
vary
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varies
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in
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over
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 three years.
However
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,
the
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apply
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In 2015, the largest people who hold
house
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a house
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 •
Also
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, the number of people
have
Correct pronoun usage
who have
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 houses
increas
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increased
 in 2015.
According to
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bar
Add an article
the bar
a bar
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 graph, there
is
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are
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 similarity
whit
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in whit
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numbers
Correct article usage
the numbers
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 of house
holder
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holders
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 In 2007, 2011 and 2015 the money
stay
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stayed
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same
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the same
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$
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at $
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50,000-$74,999,
while
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 in 2015 $100,000 or more
householder
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households
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 was the biggest.
On the other hand
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, the amount householders rose slightly, but the money from 2007 with less than 25, to
approximely
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approximately
 28
millions
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million
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 in (2014 and 2015).

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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