The charts below shows the changes in three different areas of Manchester City centre from 2003-2012

The charts below shows the changes in three different areas of Manchester City centre from 2003-2012
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The line graph illustrates the shifts in crime in three different regions of Manchester City centre between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
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, in Manchester burglary had the most significant number of crimes committed by people,
also
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, the car theft and
robbery
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statistics had grown steadily without any apparent changes. Burglary was the highest crime rate accounting for 3500 in 2003, hitting a peak at approximately 4000 rates in 2004.
However
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, it observed a dramatic decline of about 1500 victims by 2012.
On the other hand
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, compared with burglary rates car theft and
robbery
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had moderate rose by the end of the period. Car theft in 2003 was around 2500 crimes that had increased slightly over 3000 incidents.
However
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,
robbery
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had not predicted any major shifts of 500 incidents at the beginning of the period,
additionally
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, in 2005
robbery
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cases increased roughly to 1000 times of crimes and decreased, but it remained at the same rate in 2012.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words robbery with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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