You have just read an article in a national newspapaer which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. •Write a letter to the editor of the newspapaer. In your letter •Say which points in the article you agree with •Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres •Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of article.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

This

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has reference to your article on " town centres" in Times of India on 2nd Feb 2024. I am writing about my disagreement on the similarity of City centres in

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India. I fully agree with the point that city centres in my country are crowded and

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traffic

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old style

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roads.

Morover

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, all the major shops

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located in

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are major attractions for the users as these sell goods at cheaper rates as compared to the Malls.

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, Now the cities have been

delvelping

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developing

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amenties sush

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amenities such

as good bus services, good rest

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,with

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supply of freshwater.

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, Roads are wider and

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under controlled

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traffic signals and traffic police. The Town centre

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been under CCTV cameras, to watch

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illegal activities

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chain snatching and Pocket pickers. I hope

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information finds you well

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and will clear

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points. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Jashan.

jshnjawanda1Tue Feb 11 2025

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Language and Grammar

Make sure to correct any spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, as these can affect clarity.

Content Depth

Consider elaborating more on how your town center is unique compared to others, perhaps mentioning specific landmarks or features.

Coherence and Clarity

Strengthen your concluding statement to clearly express your offer for a guided tour and its benefits.

Task Response

You clearly stated your disagreement with the article, showing critical engagement with the topic.

Coherence and Organization

The structure of your letter is clear, with distinct sections addressing different points.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

diverse
architecture
landmarks
chain stores
community engagement
historical significance
cultural heritage
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unique features
local markets
festivals
guided tour
perspective
similarity
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