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Band 2.5

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you get home , you realized you had left you wallet there.

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Dear Lucy, I hope
this
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letter
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 finds you well. Thank you
to
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so
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 much for giving me
wonderful
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a wonderful
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 and happy
a
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apply
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week. The reason why I am writing
this
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letter
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 to you
that
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is that
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 I want you to help me with something. When I stay your home, I left my wallet. I remembered about
this
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 after I
to come
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came
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 back home.There
are
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is
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 a lot of money and my ID card inside my wallet.You know too, I have
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an importent
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importent
Correct your spelling
important
 exam recently and I necessary my ID card for that. In
this
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letter
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, I
described
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describe
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 my purse
for
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so
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 you find it easily.It is so valuable for me,because of that,
This
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 purse my grandparents gave
as
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me as
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 a gift
this
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 purse for
me
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apply
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to
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apply
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my sixteenth birthday. It
cover
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covers
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 brown leather and my
last
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 name to the stamp
to
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on
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 it. I hope that you find it. and
plase
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please
place
 urge report for me. If you find my wallet, you send
to
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it to
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 me through the most reliable postage. Thank you for your attention to my
letter
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. Look forward to
answer
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your answer
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. Best regards Jessica Alba.

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grammar
Make sure to proofread your letter for grammar and spelling mistakes. For example, you wrote 'to much' instead of 'too much'.
coherence
Enhance the logical flow of your letter. Try to connect your ideas more smoothly, especially when transitioning between topics.
task achievement
Include a clear request at the conclusion of your letter to emphasize what you are asking Lucy to do.
specific examples
Incorporate more details about the contents of your wallet to create a clearer picture for Lucy.
positive sentiment
Your letter expresses gratitude and appreciation for the time spent with Lucy, which adds a warm touch.
relevance
You clearly state the urgency of needing your ID card due to an important exam, which is relevant and significant.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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