The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comprisions where relevant.

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subway
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railway
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system in six cities.
Overall
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, the table shows that the oldest and longest underground
railway
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systems
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is located in
the
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London, UK.
Tokyo
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has the biggest
passenger
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number of passengers

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.
Kyoto
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and Los Angeles are generally less popular than
others
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cities. The first underground
railway
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systems
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system

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was opened in 1863 in
the
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London
then
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was
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opened in
the
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Paris in 1900.
Next
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subway
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railway
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systems
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was opened in 1927 in
the
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Tokyo
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and there is the most famous
subway
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, we can see it when we see the given table, there is display that 1927
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millions passenger
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visited
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subway
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. After the
Tokyo
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was opened in
the
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Washington DC in 1976.
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was opened in
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Kyoto
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in 1981 and
the
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last
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in
the
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Los Angeles in 2001. The longest underground
railway
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systems
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system

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in
the
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London
about
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394
kilometers
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kilometres

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of route
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long

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. The smallest underground
railway
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systems
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system

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in
the
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Kyoto
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about
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28
kilometers
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of route. The most popular
subway
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in
Tokyo
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about 1927
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millions
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passengers
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per
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. The
subway
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in
the
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Paris
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extremely popular about 1191
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millions
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million

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passengers
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. The
less
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popular
using
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the
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subway
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in
Kyoto
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about
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45
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millions
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million

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passengers
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. After
Kyoto
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less popular using the
subway
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in Los Angeles about 50
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millions
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million

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passengers
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per
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