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work is being done on the street where you live. the noise is distrurbing you. write a letter of complaint to your local coucil. in your letter: - introduce yourself, - explain what the problem is, - suggest solutions to this issue.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about
disturbing
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 loud environment on the street
nearby
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 my house, caused by the undergoing work. The noise is unpleasant not only
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 but
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other
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 families in the neighborhood. By way of introduction, my name is Natalia, working as a Teacher at the Community College. I am one of the citizens living by Rose Street. It is only 5 months since
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 and my family have moved to the town and
everyday
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 is a struggle
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 us. Unfortunately, we have been experiencing an increasing noise day by day
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 road
maintenence
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maintenance
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 happens even in late night hours. It is an
enourmous
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enormous
 issue now as it affects online lectures given to my students. It
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 impacts my children as loud drilling wakes them up. With that said, we neither see any sign of finishing operations nor information provided by the government on the progress made. My suggestion
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 problem is to set up fixed working hours for the workers. I would
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advice
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to
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 refrain from any jobs during weekends. I am sure that
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 will significantly improve
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wellbeing
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. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Natalia Bochaczyk

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task achievement
Consider providing more details or examples to strengthen your argument about the impact of noise.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and supporting sentences to improve clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter has an appropriate greeting and closing, which is essential in formal correspondence.
task achievement
You've effectively described the issue at hand and how it affects your life, which demonstrates clear task achievement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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