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You should spend around 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend around 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
chart
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 and table
shows
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show
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 the amount of transportation mode usage and the reasons
of
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for
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the
Correct article usage
apply
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car
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 usage in Edmonton.
Overall
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, most transportation used in Edmonton is by
car
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.
Furthermore
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, going to work is the highest reason for using a
car
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 in Edmonton. The pie
chart
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 shows the first line of transportation is by
car
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 at 45% and followed by LRT at a percentage of 40%. These two modes of mobilisation dominated the
chart
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. Meanwhile, buses and taxis are less popular, and both portions are 10%. In the table below the
chart
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 displays the purpose of using a
car
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 for mobilisation, and it is dominated by use to go to work. The second-highest aims are for business at 45% followed by dropping children off at school by the amount of 40%.
Besides
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, the unpopular reasons for
car
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 usage in that city are shopping and free time activity. Both of them have a percentage of 15%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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