the diagram displays the process of recycling plastic bottles

the diagram displays the process of recycling plastic bottles
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the diagram displays the process of recycling plastic bottles
The diagram below presents the process of recycling plastic
bottles
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including nine steps in all.
It is clear that
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the
bottles
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are collected from the dustbins and transferred to
recycling
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the recycling
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centre at first.
Then
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the centre turns the
bottles
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into the plastic raw material through a series of
process
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processes
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. The
materials
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are
finally
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used to produce several end products again including
bottles
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. There are complicated courses taken to make the
bottles
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turn
to
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into
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raw
materials
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.
Firstly
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, the plastic
bottles
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are sorted artificially to pick up the renewable ones from all the scraps collected.
Secondly
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, the renewable ones are compressed into blocks which are prepared to be crushed into fragments and debris. After that, the fragments and tissues are washed and
putted
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put
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into the high-speed blender to produce powders. The powder is
finally
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heated
with
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at
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high temperature and
form
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forms
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solids after solidification to produce the raw
materials
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in regular shapes. The cycling continued when the end products produced by the
materials
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are
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were
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abandoned to the dustbins.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles, materials with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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