You have discovered a lot of rubbish in a lake near where you live. In the past, the lake had always been clean. Write a letter to the local council. In the letter: · describe the type of rubbish that you saw in the lake · explain where you think the waste has come from · suggest what the council should do about the problem

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Dear sir, I am writing

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to inform you that I have been unhappy and to make it more

specific

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disappointed

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the lake situation I have found. So recently I

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the AL-salam

lake

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with my family since

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have been

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for almost a

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months now , and

unfortunately

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I found a lot of garbage on the west side of it, and it is mostly plastic dishes from the restaurant that has open

near by

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, and

clearly

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people are throwing it with the food in it , which causing a really bad smell make me and my family leave. My suggestion is to instal

a garbage bins

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pot

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around the lake

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also

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near the restaurant , so people do not have an excuse anymore It would be very helpful for me and the people living

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near by

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visitors

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Thank so much you for your cooperation Hala

halaalmuwayshirWed Feb 19 2025

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Try to have a clear introduction that states your purpose more effectively. For instance, you could start by mentioning your concerns specifically about the lake.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea more clearly. The second paragraph could be split into two: one discussing the type of rubbish and the other discussing its source.

coherence and cohesion

Consider reviewing your spelling and grammar, such as 'tow months' which should be 'two months', and 'instal' which should be 'install'.

task achievement

You effectively expressed your concerns about the situation at the lake, which shows your engagement with the issue.

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The suggestion to install garbage bins is a practical solution that addresses the problem well, which shows your thoughtfulness about community resources.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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