You have recently moved to a new neighborhood. Write a letter to a friend about your new neighborhood. In your letter: Describe the new neighborhood Explain why you moved there Talk about your neighbors You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Hello Dear Saleh, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. In

this

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essay, I will write about my

experiece

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experience

moving to a new neighbourhood.

To begin

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, I moved to a new building recently, The new area is beautiful, They have supermarkets near the home,

Besides

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, There is a hospital and open 24 hours. Behind my house, there is a garden which

view

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from

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a nice mountain with the river. I moved for many reasons,

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, There are two main reasons, My son is being joined in university, And the previous house is far from his university,

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, I decided to move.

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Also

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my work became nearer than before. on the first

day

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I have got some problems at the new house I did not have electricity and water,

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, My

neighbor

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helped me, And gave us everything we needed. Thank you, I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Kim Sincerely

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language

Make sure to proofread for spelling and grammatical errors such as 'experiece' and 'neighbourhood'.

structure

Consider organizing your ideas more clearly into distinct paragraphs; for example, one for describing the neighborhood, another for the reason for your move, and a third for discussing neighbors.

tone

The letter has a friendly and conversational tone, making it engaging to read.

content

You provided specific details about your new neighborhood, which helps paint a clear picture for your friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

152 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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