You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: • Explain your situation • Describe your problems • Tell him or her when you think you can start.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to tell you that I will not be able to start the new job next week as planned. I was really looking forward to it, but I am facing some problems at the moment. Recently, I had some personal and health issues, which I did not expect. I have been feeling unwell and had to visit the doctor. He said I
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to take some more days to rest.
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, I have a few family matters to take care of, which need my attention right now. Because of these reasons, I would like to delay my start date. I think I will be ready to join the job in about ten days from now. I hope
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change is possible and not too much trouble for you. Sorry again for
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situation, and thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Mark Evans

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Consider adding a brief introduction to reaffirm your excitement about the role and express regret for the delay. This can enhance the overall tone of the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. You might want to separate personal issues and family matters into distinct sentences or paragraphs for clarity.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear structure with distinct sections for the situation and the reasons for the delay, which improves readability.
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The tone is polite and respectful, making it suitable for a work communication, which reflects well on your professionalism.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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