The chart shows British Emigration to selected destination between 2006 and 2009.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destination between 2006 and 2009.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows British Emigration to selected destination between 2006 and 2009.
The bar chart depicts the migration of Britons to five different countries from the
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2006 to 2009.
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,
Australia
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remains Britain’s most preferred destination, with the highest
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of migrants
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after
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. The least popular country for resettlement was Greece, with the lowest
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of
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moved over the period. Regarding
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and Canada, In 2006, the
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of
people
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who relocated to
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was 42,000, which was 6,000 more than in Canada. After three years,
Australia
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recorded the relocation of 52,000 British nationals, the highest figure in four years. The second most desired nation among British citizens was Canada, with almost the same
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of resettlements of 36,000
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in 2006 and 2007, but its popularity declined in the following two years, with fewer than 30,000 migrations noted in 2008 and 2009. In terms of the other three nations, at least 20,000
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moved to Germany each
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,
whereas
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the United
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emigration ranged between 20,000 and 25,000
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during the same time period.
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Greece had almost 35,000 visitors in 2007, it ended up with the
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number
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of visitors, just under 15,000 compared to the other five countries.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, australia, number, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • emigration
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • destination
  • economic opportunities
  • political stability
  • lifestyle
  • year by year
  • broader social or economic trends
  • influential factors
  • job market conditions
  • housing prices
  • quality of life
  • popular destinations
  • speculate
  • analyze
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