The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Umar

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The two maps illustrate information about the city of Nelson which

revolutions

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in recent

time

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times

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Overall

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generally

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the city was developed dramatically,

the

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corner part of the town

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also

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completely modernized.The university remained unchanged over the given period. In the metropolis exactly in the north and east way,before 2000

tree

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were planted

however

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citizens

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of Nelson cut down trees ,

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instead

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of them residents decided to build

new

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shopping mall.Next to

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the university stayed the same throughout the years,below

study

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centre new train stations which in 2000

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demolished and relocated near to

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.In the centre of Nelson city was set up bike rental

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which have an assembled road to the university throwing new train station. Inhabitants removed the old market and replaced it with a new shop .The road

converted

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and nowadays is a pedestrian path .The south side of the tone in 2000

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nothing and in the west way was a built

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apply

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restaurant in the other hand

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established bars and clubs

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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