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The given charts show the main sources of energy in the USA in 1980 and 1990. where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons. Gia Linh

The given charts show the main sources of energy in the USA in 1980 and 1990. where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons. Gia Linh
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The charts below illustrate the main sources of
energy
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 which are oil, Natural Gas, Coal, Hydroelectric
Power
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, and Nuclear
Power
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 in the USA in the
years
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 1980 and 1990. It can be seen, that the highest source of
energy
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 in 1980 and 1990 was the oil which dropped between the two
years
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 from 42% to 33%.
In addition
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, the usage of hydroelectric
power
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 was kept the same at 5% where it was needed in small amount in the USA.
Also
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, a slight difference in the percentage of natural gas in both
years
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 26% and 25%. Nuclear
Power
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 has potentially increased through the
years
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, in the year 1980 it was 5%and in 1990 it increased to 10% respectively. The utilization of Coal
also
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 increases over time, from 22% to 27% as shown. Both hydroelectric
power
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 and nuclear
power
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 were the minimal sources of
energy
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 In summary, the need for
energy
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 sources in the USA is essential for living and it's gradually increasing
according to
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 its use.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, power, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • renewable sources
  • fossil fuels
  • proportion
  • dominance
  • trends
  • decline
  • usage
  • technological advancements
  • policy shifts
  • market demand
  • comparison
  • statistical data
  • significance
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