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The graph below shows the number of enquiries to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email, and in person from January 2001 to June 2001.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email, and in person from January 2001 to June 2001.
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The line graph illustrates the statistics of
enquiries
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 to travellers data office which are made by telephone, by email, and in
person
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 between the first month and sixth month of 2001.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
although
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 during the whole period, the count of demands by telephone and in
person
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 rose steadily, the number of
enquiries
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 made by electronic mail/letter decreased gradually.
However
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 the cardinal of appeals made by telephone was 2 times more than those made in
person
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 in January, the
enquiries
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 in
person
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 grew slightly and reached 800 in March.
Additionally
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, the inquiries made by phone and in
person
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 continued to increase and reached a peak of almost 1200 in June 2001. The quantity of
enquiries
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 made by email/letter stood up at 600 in January 2001.
This
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 amount had no significant change in the next two months
while
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 since March the number of askings by email/letter declined smoothly to 200 in June 2001.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words enquiries, person with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enquiry
  • telephone
  • letter/email
  • in-person
  • trend
  • peak
  • fluctuate
  • duration
  • compared to
  • noteworthy
  • stability
  • graph
  • January 2001
  • June 2001
  • common
  • approach
  • data
  • analysis
  • summary
  • period
  • average
  • number of enquiries
  • popularity
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