The graph below shows the average number of years of education, by country between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of years of education, by country between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average number of years of education, by country between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the line graph provides key information about
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of years in education, by region between 1950 and 2010 in multi-stages , the units are measured in per cent .
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, it is clear from the graph that, the high school category achieved the maximum tendency in
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1950.
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, the postgraduate started at the minimum
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.
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, the gradute in 1950 were in higher
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in 70% and dropped after that into the lowest rate .
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what the graph is shown that high school dropped into the lowest
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from 80% to 50% throughout 1950 and 2010. it looks equal to postgraduate because the trend represents at the same rate. In terms of, Both of hight school and graduate started at the peak of percentage of in the nation,
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postgradute started from down after that pattern fluctuated between 70% and 60% ranging 1950 and 1970 after that the trend met with another
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in the minimal portion.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words level with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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