The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

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The maps display a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed substitutions for 2025 to make it safer for families and children.
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, the changes of
a
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the
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park
which
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apply
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proposed
on
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in
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2025 would undergo the addition of facilities for families and children compared to 2016 which only served the view of fauna. In 2025, the Pond area would be added the number of
bench
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benches
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become four
item
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items
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compared to 2016 which were only three
bench
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benches
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. In the corner below the pond, flowers' placed would be changed with Bush in 2025 and the opposite of flowers
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would be substituted with Playground in that
years
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year
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. The Trees area next to the flowers, would share with family facilities
such
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as Desks, Chairs and Barbecue to increase the comfortable experience in the Garden. The two gates in 2025 would be erased to make people easy to enter the park.
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, the road would be expanded with four
junction
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junctions
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compared to only one direction in 2016.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • park
  • playground
  • proposed changes
  • safety
  • families
  • children
  • layout
  • features
  • concerns
  • green spaces
  • sidewalks
  • lighting
  • accessibility
  • impact
  • community
  • outdoor activities
  • social interaction
  • property values
  • disruption
  • construction
  • residents
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