You are planning a business trip to another city. You will have some free time to do some sight seeing while you are there. Write a letter to a friend who lives in the city you will visit. In your letter explain the purpose of the trip ask about things to do and see in the city invite your friend to do something with you during your visit

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Dear John, Hope

this

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mail finds you well. I am writing

this

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letter to plan

meeting

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a meeting

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apply

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next week during my business travel to your city. My company has organised a strategy

meet

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meeting

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next week in London from Monday 1st Aug till Friday 7th Aug. I will be attending

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event and my

accomodation

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accommodation

is booked in the Hotel Taj which is not far from your place.

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weekday will be busy for me, I will be free from Friday evening till Sunday. So, we can plan to spend some

time

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together on the weekend. To make the best use of our

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, I wanted to check about some famous attractions in the city that we can plan to visit. I have heard

London

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the London

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eye

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is really popular among tourists there. What's your opinion

reagarding

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regarding

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? There is a Tennis match planned on Sunday in

Wimbeldon

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Wimbledon

few

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a few

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Kilometers away

London

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from London

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. If you are free, I can book the tickets for two and we can enjoy the contest and spend some quality

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over there. It will be really cool to hang out after

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a long

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best Regards,

Sumit

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Submit

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coherence and cohesion

You're doing well in establishing a clear purpose for your trip and extending an invitation. However, ensure that your inquiries about local attractions are organized cohesively within your letter.

task achievement

Consider refining your request for suggestions about attractions and activities by using inquiring phrases to enhance engagement.

positive

Your letter has a friendly tone and includes a clear invitation, which makes it engaging and personable.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

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