The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The maps compare the layouts of an island in the past
an
Correct your spelling
and
show examples
after its reconstruction and establishing a range of tourist facilities.
It is clear that
Linking Words
the desert island was transformed into a recreation
coplex
Correct your spelling
complex
.
Overall
Linking Words
, new constructions
such
Linking Words
as a restaurant and residential area are present on the modern map,
as well as
Linking Words
some
amenies
Correct your spelling
amenities
for tourists in the sea. Focusing first on land redesigning, at the top of a modern map we can see a big restaurant connected with a building of reception, which could be found south of it, by a
new
Change the adjective
newly
show examples
paved vehicle track. On both sides of the reception, two sets of bungalows for residents, placed as
sircules
Correct your spelling
circles
, are
buit
Correct your spelling
built
but
, with plenty of footpaths connecting them,
as well as
Linking Words
other places where tourists might spend their leisure time. The only objects
remained
Correct pronoun usage
that remained
show examples
untouched
are
Wrong verb form
were
show examples
palms growing
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
the east and west of the island. As for the sea area, a beach
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
the western part of the land was adapted
to
Change preposition
for
show examples
swimming. Moving to the south, there we can see a new pear constructed for holiday-makers to make the area with boats
easy
Change the word
easily
show examples
accessible.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: