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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries in three different years over a twenty-year period. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries in three different years over a twenty-year period. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the amount of
waste
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 produced in six countries, in the years, 1980, 1990, and 2000. The data were presented in millions of tonnes.
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,
waste
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production
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 increased over the 20-year period in all countries, except for Korea, which decreased. Meanwhile, the United States has the most amount of
waste
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production
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 over the years,
while
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 Ireland recorded the lowest
production
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. In 1980, 131
million
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tons
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 of
waste
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 was produced in the US, which
further
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 rose to 151
million
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tons
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 in 1990, before reaching its peak in 2000 at 192
million
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tons
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. Followed by Japan at 28
million
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tons
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 in 1980, which gradually increased to 32
million
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 in 1990,
then
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 surged to 53
million
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tons
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 in 2000. Meanwhile, Ireland, Portugal, and Poland produced the minimal amount of
waste
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 at 0.6, 2, and 4
million
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tons
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 in 1980 respectively.
Although
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 these
productionsproduction
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production
 followed an upward trajectory, these countries remained at the bottom of
waste
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 generation in 2000, at Ireland (5
million
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tons
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), Portugal (5
million
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tons
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), and Poland (6.6
million
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tons
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).
However
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, Korea
on the other hand
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, has no record of
waste
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production
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 in 1980, but later in 1990, shows
waste
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production
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 at 31
million
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tons
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, before dropping to just 19
million
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tons
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 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, production, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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