You have just finished a language course provided by your company and want an- other. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter you should say: - why you liked the course - why you need more - and say where and when the course should take place

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter regarding a
language
course
in our company. I am very grateful for the opportunity to attempt
this
course
.
Furthermore
, I am kindly asking you for permission, to take a place in the second edition of the
language
course
. The
language
level on the
course
was very high,
additionally
, the teacher was very demanding. In my opinion,
such
an experience was very inspiring. After the
course
, I spent a lot of time improving my
language
skills, unfortunately, my skills are still not good enough. I believe the second edition will be an excellent choice. I am sure it will give me new motivation and boost my energy to improve my knowledge. My schedule is flexible, but I am gently asking you, to organize the second edition on Friday.
At the end
of the week is always calm, so in my opinion, it should not collide with the other duties. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any
further
information. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, George
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task achievement
Consider elaborating slightly more on the specific aspects of the course that you found beneficial. This will add depth to your reasoning.
coherence cohesion
Try to ensure that each paragraph strictly adheres to the idea it presents for even clearer separation of points.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is very polite and appropriate for a formal letter to a manager.
coherence cohesion
You have successfully provided a closing statement that reinforces your main request, which is good for coherence.

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