You have just finished a language course provided by your company and want an- other. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter you should say: - why you liked the course - why you need more - and say where and when the course should take place

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter regarding a

language

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course

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in our company. I am very grateful for the opportunity to attempt

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course

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, I am kindly asking you for permission, to take a place in the second edition of the

language

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course

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. The

language

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level on the

course

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was very high,

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, the teacher was very demanding. In my opinion,

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an experience was very inspiring. After the

course

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, I spent a lot of time improving my

language

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skills, unfortunately, my skills are still not good enough. I believe the second edition will be an excellent choice. I am sure it will give me new motivation and boost my energy to improve my knowledge. My schedule is flexible, but I am gently asking you, to organize the second edition on Friday.

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of the week is always calm, so in my opinion, it should not collide with the other duties. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any

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information. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, George

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task achievement

Consider elaborating slightly more on the specific aspects of the course that you found beneficial. This will add depth to your reasoning.

coherence cohesion

Try to ensure that each paragraph strictly adheres to the idea it presents for even clearer separation of points.

task achievement

The tone of your letter is very polite and appropriate for a formal letter to a manager.

coherence cohesion

You have successfully provided a closing statement that reinforces your main request, which is good for coherence.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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