You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

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Dear Dan, How are you? Hope

you’re

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doing well! I am writing to invite you to a party I’m hosting, and I’d love for you to be there.

This

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party is to celebrate my 25th birthday, and it wouldn’t feel complete without you.

Moreover

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, I’m relocating to another city for my higher education, so it would be

wonderful

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a wonderful

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occasion to meet all of my

well wisher

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well-wishers

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. It’s going to be a fun evening with great food, music, and plenty of laughter. The venue is my new apartment,

nearby

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near

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Surrey

central station

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Central Station

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. If

you’re

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coming by train, you can get off at Surrey

central skyline station

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Central Skyline Station

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, and it’s just

short

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a short

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taxi ride from there. If

you’re

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driving, take Fraser

highway

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Highway

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, and you’ll reach the venue

about

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at about

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6 pm. Let me know if you need more detailed

direction

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. Since

you’re

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coming from another city, I’d offer you to stay over at my place

instead

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of going to

hotel

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the hotel

a hotel

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. I’ve got

spare

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a spare

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room ready for you, so you won’t have to worry about anything. Let me know if you can make it. I really hope you can. Can’t wait to see you. Love, Reet

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task achievement

Consider adding a specific date and time for the party to provide clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to use transition phrases to enhance the flow between ideas.

positive

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is suitable for inviting a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

191 words

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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

The Closing

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