Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the photograph you sent to the competition tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown invite him/her to the exhibition

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Dear Yash. I hope you're doing absolutely fantastic! I'm beyond thrilled to inform you that I have won the Best Photography Award. My winning photograph will be showcased in an exhibition to appreciate my work and inspire others. You know that I'm passionate about photos and I'm always carrying my DSLR camera with me. A month ago, I was randomly capturing pictures of birds when I discovered a beautiful bird flying around the area and took several pictures of it and submitted one to the National Geographic Photo contest. Later, I found out that the picture I had taken was one of the most rare bird species. Ultimately, I received the maximum votes for the best picture of the year and I won

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competition.

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, I am very excited about

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exhibition, where my photograph will showcase and I am

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inviting you and your family to be a part of

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special occasion on the upcoming weekend. I hope to see you at the event. Yours Truly Vairag.

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Consider providing more specific details about the exhibition, such as the location and timing, to make it more informative.

coherence

To enhance coherence, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea; for example, keep personal anecdotes separate from the main points about the exhibition.

writing tone

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for informal correspondence.

engagement

Your excitement and passion for photography are communicated effectively, making it engaging for the reader.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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The Closing

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