Being a celebrity-such as famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problems?

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Nowadays, a famous name like stars and sports people, come with unique advantages and challenges. Personally, I believe that the frame has more challenges. Becoming a celebrity is a success

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the performance pressure of any actor, actress or sportsperson.

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, when they enter an industry, with any successful picture or game achievement, the crowd make assumptions that they are new and will not do good. After that, if they do good

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the public wants better performance.

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, in the India Cricket Team Mr Virat Kohli, when started playing matches at that time Mr MS Dhoni and Mr Sachin Tendulkar were the most loved players. So, even if they were not playing anyone's game properly, we think they will do better time.

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, people make rumours that Virat is not good play, which brings demotivation in players’ minds and more hate rates in society.

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, they

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have benefits,

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as getting a frame when working in the cinema or sports industry getting sponsors, and getting more changes to work or any brand makes them brand ambassadors that extra income and popularity. As an illustration, Sir Akshay Kumar, everyone loves his acting and because of

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every year still he does do average of four movies at the age of 59 as an action hero or main character. Even though, a few new faces are banned from a few film productions not of him.

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, his all movies are superhits or blockbusters. In conclusion, whether we have a frame or not, everybody has challenges and advantages but as a public image, it is important to perform well and maintain your fans, which easy to stay longer in the industry.

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Clarify and expand on your main argument to make it more persuasive.

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Enhance the overall structure of your essay by clearly separating the introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion to improve readability.

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Use more specific examples, and support claims with evidence or personal experiences for better clarity.

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You included relevant examples from real-life celebrities to support your ideas, which adds credibility to your argument.

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Your essay conveys a personal opinion, showing engagement with the topic.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

285 words

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Being a celebrity-such as famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problems?

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.