The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
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The maps illustrate some changes occurring in a public library over a 20-year period.
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, the central library has been improved with the installation of a number of services and facilities, with some areas converted for other purposes. In detail, tables and chairs have been removed, which was in front of the entrance. On the left of the entrance, the enquiry desk has been demolished to build the cafe.
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, a computer room, which has been erected opposite the cafe after the reading room was pulled down. Moving on to the remaining places, in the middle of the library, adult fiction
books
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have been moved from the left to the right, next to the cafe and other facilities
also
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have been installed
such
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as an information desk and self-service machines. Meanwhile, adult non-fiction
books
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have been demolished and all reference
books
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placed
on
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in
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the old spot of adult fiction
books
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. In the left corner, the lecture room has been knocked down for the construction of children's
books
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. Oppositely, a recreational area has been replaced by children's fiction
books
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to organise storytelling events with new facilities
such
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as
the
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sofa.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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