Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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language

Improve grammatical accuracy and spelling (e.g., 'opinion', 'guarantee', 'planets', 'humanity').

structure

Develop a clearer introduction that states both views explicitly and outlines your opinion more effectively.

content

Provide more specific examples to support your arguments, especially regarding the benefits of space exploration and the importance of solving Earth's problems.

content

You discuss both sides of the argument, demonstrating an understanding of the topic.

perspective

You express a clear opinion in favor of addressing Earth's issues first, which adds strength to your essay.

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

unprecedented opportunities
extraterrestrial
satisfy human curiosity
practical benefits
inspiring goal
testament to human ambition
pursuit of knowledge
critics argue
imprudent
plague Earth
immediate attention
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well-being
quality of life
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advancements
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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are so popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Older generation often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thoughts and behavior. Most people argue that it is not helpful for younger generations to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?