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Writing Samples
Band 5

You had lost contact with a friend but you managed to get her contact lately and de cide to write a letter Explain how you got hold of her contact explain why you want to contact her ask questions about herself

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Dear Reeta, I hope
this
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 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of
the
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apply
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spirits.We have been out of touch
from
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for
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 five years and, I missed you badly . I got your contact number from Ankita in a society welfare function,
last
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 week. I have been searching
you
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for you
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 on social
site
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sites
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from
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for
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last
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the last
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 few years,but I could not find
your
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apply
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any contact
detail
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details
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of
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apply
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you
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apply
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. Ankita told me that you got married
with
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to
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successful
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a successful
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businessmen
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businessman
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, which seems good for you. I got
job
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a job
the job
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 in a government school as a Teacher.Actually, I want to ask you about your marriage life experience as I am getting married next month. I
listened
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heard
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 from Ankita that you are going to start up your own business of clothing ,
I
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and I
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want to become
partner
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a partner
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 in your business. I have good
knoweldge
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knowledge
 of clothes and, I
also
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 want to invest my time and money in your organisation.If you are interested
to do
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in doing
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parternership
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a partnership
 with me
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, please let me know as soon as possible. Hoping prompt response from you.
Your
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Yours
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 Faithfully Aman

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General
Make sure to proofread for small grammatical errors such as punctuation and word choice to enhance clarity.
Coherence
Try to maintain a clear structure. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve coherence.
Tone
While your tone is generally warm, ensure it remains formal for written communication.
Content
You successfully expressed your feelings of missing your friend, which adds a personal touch to your letter.
Content
Your intention to reconnect and your interest in her business show initiative and engagement.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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