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Writing Samples
Band 2.5

you are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbour to look after your house why you want to go away what you want your neighbour to look after if there are any problem then giove instructions

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Dear Reeta, I hope
this
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 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.I am writing
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 letter to request you to take care
my
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of my
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 home because I have planned to go on
trip
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a trip
the trip
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 with my family members next week.You informed me that you are coming .I want to request you to check my house
everyday
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every day
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. My pet dog is familiar with you so I need your help to feed and look after him.As you know, I have many plants in my garden,which need to be watered
everyday
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every day
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. I ordered some clothes online and, these will be shipped on 17
march
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March
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 at 2p.m .Please check our post box
everyday
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every day
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 at morning to get a newspaper. A plumber will come to repair our sink because It
has
Verb problem
is
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 totally blocked,I gave your
conatct
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contact
 number so that you can tell
a
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the
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 problem of
sink
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the sink
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. Thank you for all your help and I will try to meet you soon.
Your
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Yours
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 Faithfully Aman

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coherence and cohesion
Consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance the overall flow of the letter.
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Make sure to proofread for minor grammatical errors and typos, such as 'take care my' instead of 'take care of my', and 'conatct' instead of 'contact'.
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Try expanding on certain points for clarity. For example, explain why the plumber needs to come and the urgency of the repairs.
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The letter has a clear purpose and specifies what the neighbor needs to do, which makes it easy to understand.
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The inclusion of specific tasks, like feeding the dog and watering the plants, shows attention to detail and provides clarity.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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