The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

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The two maps illustrate how

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road

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the road

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approach to a city hospital had been changed between 2007 and 2010. By and large,

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to two

round about

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roundabout

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that have been added to the south of the hospital. A car park for general usage and a bus station have been constructed

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the east and west sides, respectively. Obviously, the city hospital in 2007 was surrounded by a ring

road

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Additionally

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, to the

south

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south,

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there was a hospital

road

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, that was connected to the city

road

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Besides

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a number of bus stops

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both sides of it.

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, a car park that

used

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was used

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by staff and

public

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the public

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was located

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the east side of the hospital

road

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However

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, in 2010, the new public car park

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built

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the east of the hospital alongside the ring

road

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additionally

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, the two

roundabout

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roundabouts

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constructed

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were constructed

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to the south along the hospital

road

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and connected

together with

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the new bus station that was located

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the west side.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accessibility
dual carriageway
roundabout
traffic flow
multi-story car park
green spaces
pedestrian provisions
footpaths
traffic signals
construction phase
ambulances
carriageway expansion
traffic congestion
pedestrian crossings
urban planning
infrastructure development

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

robots and artificial intellignec are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. why is this happening do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

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