The chart below shows what Anthropology graduated from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years .

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduated from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years .
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows what Anthropology graduated from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years .
The graph shows information about the jobs and salaries of anthropology undergraduates from the same college after they have finished their degree.
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, most of them found full-time employment ,and after 5 years of experience, they earn very high salaries in all types of jobs. The pie chart illustrates that more than half of undergraduate students had a full-time job after finishing university. Only 15% of them took a part-time job,
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13% of them had postgrad studies and 8% of them combined both part-time work and study. A fifth of students were unemployed and did not provide any information , with 12% and 8% respectively. The proportions of freelance consultants and government employers
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identical to each other , except for the column with the percentage of students with
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than 100,000 dollars. The undergrads with companies have a relatively small percentage of success compared to the other two groups. The highest amount of student income from businesses is between 50,000 and 75,000 dollars, with 35%, which is more than the combined income of two other types of jobs.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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