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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares 4 measurements in social and economic between four countries (
Canada
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,
Japan
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,
Peru
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, and Zarie) in 1994,
according to
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 United Nations statistics.
Overall
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,
Canada
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 and
Japan
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 showed
much
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a much
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 higher number in all
indicators
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, making
theses
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these
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 two countries the best in all aspects.
In contrast
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, all 4
indicators
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 of
Peru
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 and Zaire were lower, especially in annual income per person. Zaire stood at the lowest point for all
indicators
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 among the given
countires
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countries
. For
Canada
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 and
Japan
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, both of them
also
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 had almost 100%
of
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adult literacy rate and their life expectancies at birth were around 80, making no big differences between these
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.
Although
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 their annual incomes were more than 10,000 USD per person,
Japanese
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the Japanese
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 earned more than
Canadian
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Canadians
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 could. The only indicator
Canada
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 did better than
Japan
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 was
daily
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the daily
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calories
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calorie
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 supply per person.
In terms
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 of
Peru
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, it was
at
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in
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the
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apply
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third place in all
indicators
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. The biggest difference
from
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between
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 the two
coountries
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countries
 mentioned before was the annual income since people in
Peru
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 gained only 160 USD per year;
similarly
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, those in Zarie received only 130 USD.
While
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 the adult literary rate in
Peru
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 was 68% which was not that lower than
Canada
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 and
Japan
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, the number of Zarie was only 34%, making it the
least
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lowest
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 number among all countries.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, japan, peru, indicators with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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