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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the social and economic indicators
according to
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 the United Nations statistics for four
countries
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 for the year 1994.
Overall
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, it's noticeable that
Japan
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 has the highest annual income in comparison to
Canada
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 , Peru and
Zaire
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.
Canada
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 has the highest daily calorie supply per person in relation to the three
countries
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. In
Japan
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, the annual earnings per character is the highest in comparison with the three other
countries
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,
whereas
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 in
Zaire
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 it has the lowest income.
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Likewise
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 the life expectancy at birth in
Japan
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 is almost twice as large as
Zaire
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. The Adult Literacy rate in
Japan
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 is around triple times
Zaire
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. In
Canada
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, the annual income per person takes the second highest amount in the ratio of the other
countries
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.
On the other hand
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 , the adult literacy rate is similar in
Canada
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 and
Japan
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 which is almost twice as large as
perue
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Peru
peruse
.
In contrast
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,
Canada
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 has the highest daily calorie supply per person in comparison with the other
countries
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, japan, canada, zaire with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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