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Writing Samples
Band 5.5

А Friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter give contact details For when you are away give instructions about how to take care of your pet. Describe other household duties.

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Dear Kim, First of all, I want to thank you for agreeing to take care of my house and my pet
while
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 I am out of town. For any queries or
emergency
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emergencies
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, You can contact me by making a phone call or sending a text
messgae
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message
on
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to
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 my number. I will be staying at Hampton Inn in Hamilton. My dog needs to be fed twice a day and make sure you are giving him
freshwater
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fresh water
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 throughout the day. The dog food is stored in the cabin near the fridge, which has a Pedigree to be served twice
in
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a day and milk in the fridge only be given
in
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at
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the
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night. Another thing I want to mention is that I have plants
in
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on
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 the balcony that
needs
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need
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 water on
daily
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a daily
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 basis and some indoor plants which you can water twice
in
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a week.
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, I keep ordering something as I love to do online shopping and I want you to receive my parcels and keep them in the living room. I will be thankful to you and look forward to
see
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 you soon. Your friend, Hushanpreet Kaur.

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coherence cohesion
Try to maintain consistency with verb tenses throughout your letter. For example, ‘needs’ instead of 'need' to maintain subject-verb agreement.
coherence cohesion
Break the instructions into clearer sections, perhaps using bullet points for easier reading.
task achievement
The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for the context of the message.
task achievement
You provided detailed instructions about pet care, which shows thoroughness and responsibility.
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